SCRIPT

SCENE 1- INT. PUB. NIGHT

Establishing shot of the film is slow paced dolly shot moving from one part to the other and it reveals a deserted, dim and gloomy pub. It slowly identifies two pub doors and emerging from behind them is two silloettes that come walking at incredible pace, the camera follows the two people as the sit down at a table to place bloody masks and two bags full of money onto the table.

BOSS

so were we successful?

ONE

we were

BOSS

good to hear, good to hear

snaps fingers

from the shadows of the pub two pint glasses full of lager are placed onto the table

hand over my money now boys

ONE

here's mine,

hand over money

BOSS

counting money

looks like you have paid off your debt to me

TWO

hand over money

and there is mine

BOSS

counts number two's money and look concerned

TWO

look increasingly worried

BOSS

looks like you're short

TWO

listen...

BOSS

dont you dare speak,  dont mutter a fucking sound....I gave you 48 hours to give me back all my money and you have failed.

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TWO

If you give me another day.....

BOSS

you're lucky if I give you another minute of breathing

finish drink

now you gave me 5 and I asked for 10

TWO

that's all I could get together...

BOSS

slam table

not good..... enough

now you said that you were gonna bring me a certain amount and you didnt

and do you remember what I said id do if you you didnt

TWO

yeah I do

BOSS

and what was that

TWO

you said you'd kill me

BOSS

and do you know what the difference between me and you is

TWO

whats that?

BOSS

im a man of my word

a gun appears out of the shadows from the other time of the table, to a spark of violence into the scene and blood flies all over the table. No 1 is painted in blood.

The boss apears into the light revealing his blood covered face

BOSS

laughing

here kid

fling money at ONE

ONE

thank you sir

BOSS

get yourself out of here now

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ONE

get up out of chair , put money in coat  and begin to walk out

BOSS

take him with you

ONE

drag body out of shot

final shot is of the boss leaning back into the noir, with a whiskey placed in his hand and he toasts it to the camera and smiles.

Dramatic noise transition into black.